"The" My Story
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"The" My Story
Here's the first page of my new story, "The":
My Dearest Roger Cunningham,
I write you this letter from the far away island of Australia.
I've missed you so much during the years, I haven't heard any news of you.
Andy is in University now, and lives a few steps away from my house.
The reason, dear Roger, the reason I write this, this letter, is to tell you that my The has been stolen.
I can't seem to find any answers Roger, I can't find neither.
I must not blame anyone, but I must tell you that Johan has disseapeared. Johan left not to late after I found out I didn't have it.
You must help me Roger Cunningham, you must. I cannot live find the fourth M wihout my The.
The first M and the second are secure, where it always has been. But they are in danger, you are responsible for this I dare say, why did you have the must to leave us, Roger?
I am not responsible for your piano, please return.
You and I know there's not much time left,
I must go soon,
Farewell,
Patricia Blood.
My Dearest Roger Cunningham,
I write you this letter from the far away island of Australia.
I've missed you so much during the years, I haven't heard any news of you.
Andy is in University now, and lives a few steps away from my house.
The reason, dear Roger, the reason I write this, this letter, is to tell you that my The has been stolen.
I can't seem to find any answers Roger, I can't find neither.
I must not blame anyone, but I must tell you that Johan has disseapeared. Johan left not to late after I found out I didn't have it.
You must help me Roger Cunningham, you must. I cannot live find the fourth M wihout my The.
The first M and the second are secure, where it always has been. But they are in danger, you are responsible for this I dare say, why did you have the must to leave us, Roger?
I am not responsible for your piano, please return.
You and I know there's not much time left,
I must go soon,
Farewell,
Patricia Blood.
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Re: "The" My Story
I wanted to keep the start small.
You know, it's kinda perfect.
You know somethings going to happen, but you're not sure what, and I also put some curiosity, that will make you turn the page.
I guess this is not the best start I can get, I might fix it later.
I like that I already have 3 characters there, Patricia, Johan and Roger.
Oh and I know about the mistakes in writing, thus sum up detail.
In the book, the letter is very important, the letter is what will make it good.
You'll see!
You know, it's kinda perfect.
You know somethings going to happen, but you're not sure what, and I also put some curiosity, that will make you turn the page.
I guess this is not the best start I can get, I might fix it later.
I like that I already have 3 characters there, Patricia, Johan and Roger.
Oh and I know about the mistakes in writing, thus sum up detail.
In the book, the letter is very important, the letter is what will make it good.
You'll see!
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You also introduced Andy!
I payed attention.
So yeah 4 Characters!
You are very talented and now I feel inspired to write a book!
I payed attention.
So yeah 4 Characters!
You are very talented and now I feel inspired to write a book!
Flame Hawk- Administrator
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Haha forgot about Andy, he's actually quite important.
I have the must to say well done Flame Hawk, paying attention is very important.
I have the must to say well done Flame Hawk, paying attention is very important.
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Re: "The" My Story
Hahaha!
I chose it because it goes with the character!
Tell me names because I'm looking for one that will suit a character
I chose it because it goes with the character!
Tell me names because I'm looking for one that will suit a character
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Re: "The" My Story
How about:
Brock
Kyle
Jacob
Elizibeth
Alex
Ace
Lyla
Annabeth
Autumn
Those are the names I like and they were all in Adventure Books I have read.
Brock
Kyle
Jacob
Elizibeth
Alex
Ace
Lyla
Annabeth
Autumn
Those are the names I like and they were all in Adventure Books I have read.
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Um, I'd like the names to be more, you know, unique.
Plus the book is not adventarous nor action(nious..?)
The story is more of a mistery, or a uncategorized
Plus the book is not adventarous nor action(nious..?)
The story is more of a mistery, or a uncategorized
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Sol???? Spanish for sun i believe that sounds cool!
Jak???
Jak???
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I don't want cool!
Look at the names I have:
Patricia: Posh, Worries,
Roger: Seems to have left some sort of group, old
Andy: (?)
Johan: Villain or part of the group?
Look at the names I have:
Patricia: Posh, Worries,
Roger: Seems to have left some sort of group, old
Andy: (?)
Johan: Villain or part of the group?
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Andy goes to the University!
I payed attention.
Names:
GIRLS
Crystal
Rocky
CeCe
Bianca
Venice
BOYS
Ralph
Oliver
Percy
Kron/Cron
Sam (SolCrystal!!!)
I payed attention.
Names:
GIRLS
Crystal
Rocky
CeCe
Bianca
Venice
BOYS
Ralph
Oliver
Percy
Kron/Cron
Sam (SolCrystal!!!)
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Re: "The" My Story
i have written stories to! i have a small book full of scince fiction that i have written! i wish i could show you the story, but there is not enough room for a copy and paste here! do any of you know a website where i can post it?
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