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"The" My Story

Post by Blonguin on Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:52 pm

Here's the first page of my new story, "The":

My Dearest Roger Cunningham,
I write you this letter from the far away island of Australia.

I've missed you so much during the years, I haven't heard any news of you.
Andy is in University now, and lives a few steps away from my house.

The reason, dear Roger, the reason I write this, this letter, is to tell you that my The has been stolen.
I can't seem to find any answers Roger, I can't find neither.
I must not blame anyone, but I must tell you that Johan has disseapeared. Johan left not to late after I found out I didn't have it.
You must help me Roger Cunningham, you must. I cannot live find the fourth M wihout my The.
The first M and the second are secure, where it always has been. But they are in danger, you are responsible for this I dare say, why did you have the must to leave us, Roger?
I am not responsible for your piano, please return.

You and I know there's not much time left,
I must go soon,




Farewell,
Patricia Blood.
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Post by Flame Hawk on Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:05 pm

Great! This is going to be AMAZING!
Keep it up! Very Happy


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Post by Blonguin on Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:16 pm

I wanted to keep the start small.
You know, it's kinda perfect.
You know somethings going to happen, but you're not sure what, and I also put some curiosity, that will make you turn the page.

I guess this is not the best start I can get, I might fix it later.
I like that I already have 3 characters there, Patricia, Johan and Roger.

Oh and I know about the mistakes in writing, thus sum up detail. Wink
In the book, the letter is very important, the letter is what will make it good.

You'll see!
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Post by Flame Hawk on Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:23 pm

You also introduced Andy!
I payed attention.
So yeah 4 Characters!
You are very talented and now I feel inspired to write a book! Very Happy


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Post by Blonguin on Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:30 pm

Haha forgot about Andy, he's actually quite important.
I have the must to say well done Flame Hawk, paying attention is very important.

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Post by SolCrystal on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:05 pm

Add a Sam


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Post by Blonguin on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:18 pm

Typhoon will laugh at that Wink
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Post by Typhoon on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:19 pm

Laughing I did!

You chose nice names! Wink
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Post by Blonguin on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:24 pm

I bet Johan was your favourite
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Post by Typhoon on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:25 pm

Kind of! It's different.
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Post by Tyler77 x Auburn on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:28 pm

I had a Johan on my football team
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Post by Blonguin on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:29 pm

Hahaha!
I chose it because it goes with the character!

Tell me names because I'm looking for one that will suit a character
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Post by Tyler77 x Auburn on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:44 pm

Tyler Or "rock" but his real name is Joe
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Post by Flame Hawk on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:58 pm

How about:

Brock
Kyle
Jacob
Elizibeth
Alex
Ace
Lyla
Annabeth
Autumn

Those are the names I like and they were all in Adventure Books I have read.


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Post by SolCrystal on Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:16 pm

Brock is in Pokemon


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Post by Flame Hawk on Sun Feb 27, 2011 6:33 pm

Yeah I know...
That is an adventure movie/show.


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Post by Blonguin on Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:58 am

Um, I'd like the names to be more, you know, unique.
Plus the book is not adventarous nor action(nious..?)
The story is more of a mistery, or a uncategorized
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Post by SolCrystal on Mon Feb 28, 2011 11:06 am

Sol???? Spanish for sun i believe that sounds cool!

Jak???


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Post by Blonguin on Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:43 pm

I don't want cool!

Look at the names I have:
Patricia: Posh, Worries,
Roger: Seems to have left some sort of group, old
Andy: (?)
Johan: Villain or part of the group?
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Post by Flame Hawk on Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:13 pm

Andy goes to the University!
I payed attention.

Names:
GIRLS
Crystal
Rocky
CeCe
Bianca
Venice

BOYS

Ralph
Oliver
Percy
Kron/Cron
Sam (SolCrystal!!!)


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Post by Blonguin on Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:42 am

Venice is the name I gave history to in 2987
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Post by Rockmonkey on Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:06 pm

i have written stories to! i have a small book full of scince fiction that i have written! i wish i could show you the story, but there is not enough room for a copy and paste here! Sad do any of you know a website where i can post it?
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